Jamel Jarido
3/23/12
2nd hour
Hole In the Wall
Students were vanishing from Grosse Pointe South High School and no one knew why. Everyone in the school felt like they were being watched. Everyone felt the intense stares, but the feeling couldn’t be explained. People watched their backs and couldn’t find the face of the person that was staring at them. The felt they were being watched from everywhere in the school. The awkward feeling was even felt from holes in the walls and vents. It all was confusing until one day.
On a Friday late after school Nick Fasten was sent to put something in a casing in the Clemson Hall. Nick was Medium Height with smooth dark black that slicked to the right and sat on his eyebrows. He was regularly built. While he walked to the Clemson through the halls of South High School he felt another feeling. Not only the feeling of being watched. The feeling made him look around in all directions with his eyebrows forced down causing his face to wrinkle and one side of his mouth to rise. While reaching for the he recognized the feeling. It was the confusing feeling of the sense that something was wrong.
He found out why he had the feeling when he opened the door. The door open now to reveal a sight he would never forget. A ghost palming the head of Nicks bully. The bully Devin panicking trying to escape the grip of the paranormal quickly turns silent and defenseless. Only after the quick twist the ghost did with his hands snapping his neck. Everything happening before Nick could even step a foot in. With his face showing his fear he quickly slammed the door. Not warning the people in the building he ran outside and called 911. He waited on the front lawn for the police to arrive.
Three policemen arrived to the scene. Bill ,Troy, and Malcolm Saden. Nick ran to the car before they even exited thier vehicles. He with fear in his voice he ecitedly explained what happened while running across the lawn to the clemson doors. They enter the doors with Nick running behind. The sight of no evidence upseted the police. They turned around the as Nick entered the door. Nick confused by the greeting of the mad faces of the policeman starts to look around. He sees that all the evidence is no longer present. The sight makes his jaw drop.
The cops walking away angryly say that he should never pull a prank like that again. Malcolm stayed back for a smoke. Nick trying to explain what happened to Malcolm but isnt getting feed back. Malcolm shoos him off and tells him to go home. Now alone a ccouple minutes standing in front of the clemson doors, he feels a deep stare from behind. He turns around looking in the condesed doors from the foggy night. A hole in the wall catches his eye. In it he sees a familiar eye. Concerned he calls in cops on his dispatch. Tim Crayton and Nardon Vell reply saying they are on thier way.
They arrive greet each other and all walk in. Malcolm approaches the hole in looked in. In it was nothing but complete darkness. So they all left. Malcolm expierencing the feeling of depression from his son dying and his wife divorcing him goes home and get drunk. After drinking two bottlesof vodka his door bell rings. He opens it to see Nick asking to come in. He lets him in. Nick explains what happened earlier that day. Malcolm believes it but doesnt show. After the desriptive conversation he sends Nick home.
The conversation leaving him wondering he goes back to South High School. After entering the clemson hall he looks around. After a look around he turns his attention to the hole. Once again he sees the familiar eye staring at him. The eye dissappears as soon as malcolm looks at it. Malcolm runs to the hole and looks in. Once again he sees nothing. While looking in he feels a breeze coming from behind. He also feels the famous stare everyone that enters the school feels. He turns around to see a trail of blood coming from outside leading to a dead body. Over it a ghostly figure. He flees the scene and goesto his car. He calls the two cops Tim Crayton and Nardon Vell on dispatch and tell them the story.
They arrive and all run in. Only to see no evidence. Mad to see no evidence they tell Malcolm who looks mad and worried at the same time that he should go outside and get some fresh air. They both talk about how he was drunk and he probably left the door open and thought a cloud of fog that drifted in was a ghost. They still couldnt explain what he said about the dead body and the blood trail. A few minutes later Malcolm came in only to see the bodies of Tim and Nardon dead.
He once again runs back to his police car to call two more officers. They arrive to investigate the scene. While they search the two of them both see the eye in the wall. They break down the wall to witness bodies stacked wrapped in plastic to cover the smell. When they see this they turn to exit but pause at the sight of being surrounded by ghost. They all run to the trunk of thier cars to get gas, while running Malcolm once again sees the familiar eyes. They take the gas inside in pour it around the whole school. they light a match and quickly speed towards the exit. They stop at a long distance range on the lawn to watch it burn. Emerging from the flames are ghosts. Malcolm once again spots the familiar eyes but this time also the ghost behind them. They were his sons. His sons ghost runs towards him and then through him. Malcolm and the two policeman turn around to see his son and the other ghost dissappear one by one.
All three of them left the burning school and met up at malcolms house. They discussed the memorable day. They made an allaby for the burning school so they wouldnt be arrested. They all promised that the day would never be discussed again. The two cops left with a blank face leaving Malcolm wih the same face expression.

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